As I walked back from the Ballston Metro, I crossed Langston Blvd. and smiled, seeing that my car was no longer being blocked by the 18-wheeler.
Before that, I exited the Ballston Metro station, wondering if I’d be able to drive home, once I returned to my middle school.
Before that, I exited the elementary school, after an informmative 4pm meeting.
Before that, I sat down with my daughter’s old high school newspaper moderator, now an elementary principal.
Before that, I exited Courthouse Metro, after riding three stops and walking two blocks and glancing at my iPhone to see that I was right on time, five minutes until my scheduled meeting.
Before that, I committed to a Plan B and started walking the half-mile to the Ballston Metro station.
Before that, my colleague confirmed that the truck driver’s vehicle had broken down and a tow truck was on the way but could take hours.
Before that, the fire alarm went off and as I exited my middle school, I noticed that an eighteen wheeler truck was blocking the narrow parking lot driveway near the tennis courts where my car was parked.
Before that, I smiled as I pulled into the last of the seven parking spaces by the tennis courts, happy to park in the small lot closest to the back door closest to my school office.
Before that, I looked at my calendar as I finished my bowl of cereal and remembered that I had a meeting at 4pm, just a short two-mile drive from my middle school. I was ready for an uneventful day, followed by an after school meeting nearby.
NOTE: I learned about the Before that poem form here and used it first in 2022. This is my 6th Before that style poem!
A day you were not expecting. The structure here is perfect for the story than developed!
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I love this structure, Sally! Before now, I had not seen it – but it reminds me of the novel People We Meet on Vacation in the time sequences, and what a fun way to tell about a day!
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I, too, love this structure. It’s a very fun way to pull out important and relevant details!!!
You used it quite masterfully to overcome obstacles!
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I love this piece, Sally! So fun!
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This is a great structure for this story! You had me reading it in both directions. You showed remarkable determination in order to attend that meeting!
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This is a fun structure to play with. It’s like the Little House the Jack Built. I hope you made it home without any more trouble in your way.
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Sally, it is fun to see throughout your day backwards! I’m glad it all worked out. A 4 pm school meeting! Argh!
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Ack, what an adventure. It always seems it is one small thing that can make a big change!
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What a time! I had to read it a second time backwards, so much was happening. I notice you describe when there was a smile on your face, but you don’t include your face during those other moments, haha!
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Fascinating and it helps us to recall all that we did on that day.
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I love the rhythm of this format and rewinding of the moment. You perfectly capture the unpredictability of a life lived.
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This format kept me guessing! I have not tried this yet and really should. I know that lot and those courts well. Happy slicing!
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