
“I am free and will gladly help you out”, I texted to A, a teacher who needed to leave early from school on Friday. As I entered her 8th grade English classroom at 2:10pm, she was explaining the writing assignment.
“First, sketch a place you spend time at. For me, I picked my grandfather’s farm.” A moved to the chart paper where she sketched a house and a red barn. “Then think of stories that happened in this place and add them to the sketch. Next, pick one and write that story. Be sure to fill at least a half a page.”
I quickly observed that all in the room dutifully were on task and following the clear directions. As A slipped out of the classroom, I grabbed a piece of paper and a pencil and gave the assignment a try. First, I sketched High Point Pool, the place I spent so many hours of my childhood each summer. In the 25 meter portion of the sketch, I labled “swimming in swimmeets”. In the 3 feet area, I added the labels “4th of July Penny Dive” and “Marco-Polo”. In the deep end, I labeled “Sharks and Minnons”, the game I played with others when the lifeguards closed the diving boards and we could instead swim in the 10 ft deep diving area. Here’s my story of that place:
“Minnows, Go!” Tommy yelled, as he treaded water alone in the middle of the deep end. I stood on the edge of the pool with a dozen other swimming friends. As my friend/Shark’s sister, Diane, dove in first, I saw Tommy swim toward her. With him distracted, I immediately moved to the other side of the deep end and dove in. I quickly kicked my legs and reached my arms out for the other side of the pool. Once I touched the wall, I smiled, proud to have easlily reached the opposite wall without “Shark Tommy” tagging me.
As I climbed out of the pool, I noticed that now Diane and Tommy were treading water. I saw them exchanging words and then both looked right at me. Together, they shouted, “Minnows, Go!” First, I saw my friend, Susan dive in but neither Diane or Tommy moved. Then my brother, Chris dove in. Again, the two sharks kept treading water and kept looking right at me. I thought to myself, “here goes” and I dove straight down into the water. Immediately, two bodies blocked my way. I tried to kick and glide passed but soon, I needed to breathe. I kicked up to the surface and took a breath. This was followed by taps on my head from Diane and Tommy. I now was a shark.
The three of us huddled. We exchanged a name. Then we turned toward the minnows at the edge of the pool. With eyes locked on my brother, Chris, I yelled in unison with the other two sharks, “Minnows, Go!”




